This term room 9 and room 10 have been learning to write an Explanation writing First we had to choose a topic I picked what causes earthquakes. Next we had to Write notes about what causes earthquakes. We had to search up what causes earthquakes we did the first step the second step the third step and we even did the fourth step.
This term I learnt how to write an explanation. I also learnt about what causes earthquakes and the steps of what causes them. I also learnt from my friend Chloe how bees make honey. I also learnt the water cycle. My favourite thing that I learnt was how I learnt to make the DLO.
I found it easy to make my diagram and copy and paste it to my blog. I found it easy to write about what causes earthquakes. I also found most of the stuff we did for this writing easy because all we had to do basically was write about what causes earthquakes and the steps of it.
I really enjoyed making my diagram on what causes earthquakes It was my favourite thing to do about the writing. I also really enjoyed getting to pick what we wrote about because there was a hole list of things that we could write about for example we could write about how bees make honey or life cycle of a frog. But there was way more to pick out of. I really liked this writing even tho it took us a long time to do.
I found it hard to write the explanation text template because I didn't have enough notes to write about on the page. I also found it hard to think of an conclusion to write on my DLO. For my conclusion I could only think of. In conclusion a earthquake is caused by when two plate hit each other.
Next time I need to get more writing onto my diagram and I need to write more notes because I did not write enough notes for this writing. I need to add more writing to my paragraphs to make them longer and more exciting for people to read my writing.
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